题目内容
18.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.分析 本文主要介绍奥林匹克运动会的历史及现代奥运会的发展.在古代,只有希腊男子能够参加.而现代奥运会则世界各地的男女都可参加.
解答 The ancient Olympic Games began in a year 776 BC.They∧held at Olympia in Greece every four years,for almost 12 centuries,until AD 394.In the ancient Olympics,by tradition the athletes were all men but they had to compete wearing no clothes.Today,both male and female athletes from around the world can take part,no matter whatever nation they come from.Chinese athletes have great contributed to the Olympic Games where many of them won gold medals,such as Xu Haifeng,Deng Yaping and Liu Xiang,the first Asian to winning the gold medal in the men's 110-meter hurdles.The whole of China must have felt pride of them when they won.There are some of the Olympic athletes who they have brought joy to people across the world with their attempt to push the boundaries of human achievement.
详解:
1.a改为the 考查冠词.此处定冠词the表示特指.
2.加were 考查动词时态和语态.They与hold之间是动宾关系,且事情发生在过去,用一般过去时的被动语态.
3.In改为At 考查介词.at意为"[指事件发生的时间]在…时刻;在…时候".
4.but改为and 考查连词.前后两个分句之间是并列关系而非转折关系,用连词and.
5.whatever改为what 考查词语用法.no matter what=whatever,意为"无论什么",引导让步状语从句.
6.great改为greatly 考查副词.contribute是动词,要用副词修饰.
7.winning改为win 考查动词不定式.此处动词不定式作定语修饰the first Asian.
8.pride改为proud 考查形容词.feel/be proud of意为"为…感到自豪",是固定搭配.
9.去掉they 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词athletes在从句中作主语,已有关系代词who作主语,they是多余的,要去掉.
10.attempt改为attempts 考查名词复数.attempt是可数名词,根据上下文语境,要用复数形式.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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41.A.had | B.used | C.devoted | D.raised |
42.A.still | B.down | C.only | D.inside |
43.A.pleasure | B.sorrow | C.happiness | D.responsibility |
44.A.keeping | B.watching | C.cleaning | D.looking |
45.A.healthy | B.important | C.initial | D.humorous |
46.A.learn | B.grasp | C.gain | D.govern |
47.A.seen | B.run | C.called | D.found |
48.A.clothes | B.tables | C.chairs | D.dishes |
49.A.jumped up | B.flew over | C.went on | D.observed at |
50.A.so | B.such | C.very | D.as |
51.A.companies | B shops | C.factories | D.clubs |
52.A.man | B.woman | C.boy | D.manager |
53.A.over | B.on | C.towards | D.forward |
54.A.herself | B.myself | C.yourself | D.himself |
55.A.made | B.did | C.wanted | D.refused |
56.A.Long | B.Early | C.Sometimes | D.Soon |
57.A.bought | B.stuck | C.sold | D.simplified |
58.A.step | B.road | C.phenomenon | D.sense |
59.A.best | B.better | C.good | D.well |
60.A.recorder | B.singer | C.writer | D.dancer |
A. | which | B. | that | C. | what | D. | whatever |