Question

【题目】近来，一些游客旅游时的不文明行为备受热议。假设你是李华，是一名导游，请你就此现象写一篇短文发表自己的观点。内容要点如下：

1.列举不文明行为；（至少两种)

2.指出不文明行为的影响；

3. 就如何阻止不文明行为提出建议。（至少两条）

注意：1. 词数100左右；.

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 首句己给出，不计入总词数。

As a tour guide, I find it so embarrassing to see some tourists behave badly while traveling.

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Answer 1

【答案】As a tour guide, I find it so embarrassing to see some tourists behave badly while traveling. They speak loudly in public places, carve characters on tourist attractions, throw rubbish, spit everywhere, and even cross the road when the traffic lights are still red. Such bad behaviors have caused damage to people’s image.

Measures should be taken to stop this. First, tourists should be strict with themselves and learn to obey social and public order, and respect local religions and customs. Besides, kindergartens and primary schools should do more to teach the kids to be responsible citizens. Last, laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places. I hope soon tourists will change their behavior and win respect for themselves.

【解析】近来，一些游客旅游时的不文明行为备受热议。假设你是李华，是一名导游，请你就此现象写一篇短文发表自己的观点。内容要点如下：1.列举不文明行为；（至少两种)2.指出不文明行为的影响；

本文属于提纲作文。根据文章的提示可知，就一些游客旅游时的不文明行为备受热议发表自己的观点：要点有：列举至少两种不文明行为；指出不文明行为的影响； 就如何阻止不文明行为提出至少两点建议。文章的要点已给出。只要安顺序完成即可。时态要用一般现在时，在写作时注意使用高级词汇有句式，以增加文章的档次。

亮点本文结构紧凑，要点完整，层次分明。文章中使用了大量的短语如cause damage to，take measures to do…, be strict with, win respect for…等，及顺序连词,如First , … besides , … Last, … 使文章更有层次感，语言生动，句式灵活，既有主动语态又有被动语态，长句与短句并存。使用了多种句式，如状语从句（They speak loudly in public places, carve characters … when the traffic lights are still red.）和宾语从句（I hope soon tourists will change their behavior and win respect for themselves）及非谓语作状语：I find it so embarrassing to see some tourists behave badly while traveling。使语言形象生动，文章丰富多彩。