Question

【题目】每个人都行走在自己的路上, 有着不同的经历和收获。请你以“On my way to…”为题写一篇英语作文，向学校英语报投稿，要求包括以下内容：

1. 叙述在路上你的经历；

2. 谈谈你的收获和感想。

注意：

1. 词数不少于120个。

2. 文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。

Answer 1

【答案】

On My Way to Learning Chinese Calligraphy

Almost every child, during the process of learning a certain skill, will have to experience a process from resistance to love. I myself am the best illustration by changing from disliking practicing calligraphy to being devoted to it.

In my childhood, my parents sent me to learn Chinese calligraphy, believing that it could cultivate the mind and make me feel calm. However, things were quite opposite from their expectations. I not only got bored with hours of practice but also doubted about the use of it. Nevertheless, later experience proved that practicing calligraphy is both necessary and beneficial. When I entered high school and buried myself in endless homework, writing calligraphy became a fantastic way for me to relax and get rid of academic tiredness. It was at that time that I realized how important it is to master a certain skill as a leisure activity.

Judging from my own experiences, I want to say a few words to those children who have the same trouble as I once did: do not refuse to learn a skill when you are young and vital, as in the long run you will find it helpful in dismissing tiredness and negative thoughts.

【解析】

试题解析：此作文是描述自己在生活中的收获和感想，注意作文要有自己的真情实感，有内容，有深度。结构要简洁，语言上多使用高级表达，例如，一些高级句式、高级短语、高级词汇可以增加作文的文采。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。时态：用一般过去时.【亮点说明】文章第一段第一句Almost every child, during the process of learning a certain skill, will have to experience a process from resistance to love.几乎每个孩子在学习一种确定的技能的过程中，将会经历从抵抗到热按的过程。这个句子是若干个短句组成的，这样读起来会使得读者不费力气又有节奏感。第一段第二句I myself am the best illustration by changing from disliking practicing calligraphy to being devoted to it.由讨厌书法练习到喜欢它的转变，我自己就是最好的例子。其中myself是I的同谓语。第二段第一句使用了一个宾语从句。In my childhood, my parents sent me to learn Chinese calligraphy, believing that it could cultivate the mind and make me feel calm. 在我的童年里，我父母将我送去学书法，相信它可以开阔我的心让我感到安宁。第四句也是一个宾语从句Nevertheless, later experience proved that practicing calligraphy is both necessary and beneficial. 然而，后来的经历证明，练习书法既是必要的又是有益的。第五句为时间状语从句When I entered high school and buried myself in endless homework, writing calligraphy became a fantastic way for me to relax and get rid of academic tiredness.当我进入高中，将我自己埋进无边无尽的家庭作业的时候，写书法成为了我娱乐的一种奇妙的方式，帮助我摆脱学业上的压力。writing calligraphy …是一现在分词做伴随状语。第六句结合了强调句和宾语从句 It was at that time that I realized how important it is to master a certain skill as a leisure activity.就在那时，我意识到掌握了一种特定的技能作为娱乐活动是多么的重要。文章第三段开头用了一个非谓语动词做状语Judging from my own experiences,从我自己的经验来评价。I want to say a few words to those children who have the same trouble as I once did:这是一个定语从句，who在句子中代指children。do not refuse to learn a skill when you are young and vital, as in the long run you will find it helpful in dismissing tiredness and negative thoughts.不要拒绝学习一门技能，当你年轻力壮的时候，因为长远来看，你会发现它在解除疲劳和负面想法的时候是有帮助的。本文运用了大量从句，在句子结构上多使用了分词结构来避免拗口的长句，在文章结构上使用了一些很到位的连词如However、Nevertheless；还有一些短语not only…but also不仅…而且、both…and …和…；got bored with厌恶某事；get rid of 摆脱…；in the long run长期来看 。总而言之，这是一篇不错的文章。