题目内容
4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I am English student studying in China．Yesterday，I go to your cinema to see a film．The film was very good，and I did not enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema．First，the film was delayed as there was so many advertisements at the beginning．It was rather annoyed．Second，the sound of the film was such loud that I could hardly bear it．The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly，that presented potential safety problems．If something terrible should happen，it would be difficult for people to get out quick．As a visitor to your city，I'm disappointed with my experience in you cinema．I am writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and to make some improvements．
分析 作者是一位在中国留学的英国学生，到影院看电影发现了中国电影院存在的一些问题和隐患．作者在这片短文中指出了这些问题，并希望情况能得到改善．
解答 I am∧English student studying in China．Yesterday，I go to your cinema to see a film．The film was very good，and I did not enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema．First，the film was delayed as there was so many advertisements at the beginning．It was rather annoyed．Second，the sound of the film was such loud that I could hardly bear it．The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly，that presented potential safety problems．If something terrible should happen，it would be difficult for people to get out quick．As a visitor to your city，I'm disappointed with my experience in you cinema．I am writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and to make some improvements．
详解：
1．English student前面加an；考查冠词，此处用不定冠词an泛指"一个"．
2．go改为went；考查动词的时态，根据时间状语Yesterday可知要用动词的一般过去时．
3．and改为but；考查连词，结合句意"电影很好，但是我一点都不喜欢"可知要用but表示转折．
4．was改为were；考查主谓一致，根据后面的so many advertisements可知动词要用复数形式were．
5．annoyed改为annoying；考查分词作形容词，现在分词做形容词修饰物，过去分词做形容词修饰人，此处主语为it，故用现在分词形式．
6．such改为so；考查近义词辨析，so后面跟形容词或副词，such后面跟名词，此处loud为名词，故前面用such．
7．that改为which；考查关系代词，这是一个非限制性定语从句，关系代词which指代上一句提到的内容．
8．quick改为quickly；考查副词，此处用副词作状语修饰动词短语get out．
9．you改为your；考查物主代词，因为后面跟了名词cinema，所以前面要用形容词性物主代词作定语，故答案为your．
10．去掉to；考查并列结构，这里动词make和前面的consider是并列成分，在情态动词can之后要用动词原形．
点评 短文改错时首先要通读全文，了解短文基本大意，再结合上下文语境分析句子之间的关系，运用所掌握的基础语言知识找出文中的错误并加以改正．
