Question

如果你是李华，你收到了美国好友Tom发来的电子邮件，他向你询问2011年中学生英语夏令营的情况。现在请你根据以下要点给他回复一封电子邮件。

时间	8月3日-----8月7日，共5天
地点	北京
参加人数	80个学生
活动内容	举行英语朗诵比赛和写作比赛 参观北京的两所著名大学 参观了一些名胜古迹
你的收获和感受

注意：1. 可根据内容需要适当增加细节。 2.  100字左右
Dear Tom,
I was so glad to receive your e-mail. I'd like to tell you something about my English summer camp in Beijing.
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Dear tom,
I was so glad to recieve your e-mail. I'd like to tell you something about my English summer camp in Beijing.
The camp lasted five days, from August 3 to August 7, and included eighty students from different parts of the country. During the camp, we took part in English speaking and writing competitions. Encouragingly, we visited Beijing and Qinghua Universities---- the most famous universities in China. Besides, we also visited a lot of places of interest, such as the Great Wall and the Sunner Palace.
We really enjoyed ourselves at the camp,because we not only improved our spoken English  but also learned about our country's history and culture further, which will encourage us to work harder. I hope more such camps will be organized.
Best wishes!
Yours,

解析 1. 该写作主要以一般过去时为主；
　　2. 因要表达的信息多的需要，可用并列句、as well as, not only...but also等来组合句子。
　　3. 可用从句、介词短语、副词和连接词来表达，以体现句子结构的复杂性和篇章的连贯性；
4.为避免重复，尽量做到同一意思多种表达。