题目内容
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I am a student from a high school in China. I had recently bought a book from your website. However,some problems have arisen,that makes me upset. I am writing to complaint about them.
First of all,the book I ordered reached to me ten days late than expected,which brought me lots of inconvenience. What's more,when I looked through them,I found that a few pages are missed,which makes me very disappointing. I know that you are a famous book?selling website,but my experience shows how your service needs improvement. I hope you can sent me another book as soon as possibly.
Li Hua
My name is Li Hua. I am a student from a high school inChina. I had (改为have) recently bought a book from your website. However,some problems have arisen,that (改为 which) makes me upset. I am writing to complaint (去掉后面的t) about them.
First of all,the book I ordered reached to (去掉to) me ten days late (加r) than expected,which brought me lots of inconvenience. What's more,when I looked through them,I found that a few pages are missed (改为ing) ,which makes me very disappointing (改为ed) . I know that you are a famous book?selling website,but my experience shows how (改为that) your service needs improvement. I hope you can sent (改为send) me another book as soon as possibly (改为possible) .
Li Hua