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19．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．毎处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加-个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的闷用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）每句话只有一处错误，每处错误修改仅限一词．
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I will tell you about a boy I met．The other Hay after school，I was walking down the sreet while I saw a boy riding a nice unicycle．Which is like a bicycle with only one wheels．Dressing in pink from head to toe，he was singing a song which was sounded like a kid's song．I thought he must be total crazy．Just then，a lady dropped 20-dollar bill on the ground，but he didn't realize it and star-ted  to milk away．The boy  in pink picked out the money and gave it bark to her．After that，he rode on but soon disappearpd before the lady could thank him．How a strange and good  guy!

分析 本文主要讲述作者看到一个穿粉红衣服骑着独轮车的男孩，捡到一位女士的20美元后，没有犹豫地将钱还给这位女士，没等感谢就走了，让作者肃然起敬．

解答 I will tell you about a boy I met．The other Hay after school，I was walking down the sreet while I saw a boy riding a nice unicycle．Which is like a bicycle with only one wheels．Dressing in pink from head to toe，he was singing a song which was sounded like a kid's song．I thought he must be total crazy．Just then，a lady dropped∧20-dollar bill on the ground，but he didn't realize it and star-ted  to milk away．The boy  in pink picked out the money and gave it bark to her．After that，he rode on but soon disappearpd before the lady could thank him．How a strange and good  guy!
详解：
1．while改为when 考查连词．was/were doing sth．when-did sth．意为"正在做某事，这时突然…"，是一种句式结构．
2．wheels改为wheel 考查名词．wheel是可数名词，其前有数词one修饰时用单数形式．
3．Dressing改为Dressed 考查过去分词．be dressed in意为"穿着"，此处用过去分词短语作状语．
4．去掉was 考查词语用法．sound是连系动词，没有被动语态，was是多余的，要去掉．
5．total改为totally 考查副词．crazy是形容词，要用副词修饰．
6．加a 考查冠词．bill是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
7．he改为she 考查代词．此处she指代上文中的a lady．
8．out改为up 考查词语用法．pick out意为"挑选，选择"，pick up意为"拾起，捡起"，此处应是：拾起，捡起．
9．but改为or 考查连词．rode和disappearpd是并列谓语，用and连接表示动作的先后．
10．How改为What 考查感叹句．由how引导的感叹句结构形式是：How+adj．/adv．+主语+谓语．由what引导的感叹句结构形式是：What+adj+名词+主语+谓语．此处guy是名词，用what引导．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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