题目内容
【题目】为了同学们远离疾病,保持身体健康,你班将举行一次英语班会,主题为“How to be strong and healthy”。请你根据下面提示写一篇发言稿。
存在问题 | 解决方法 |
部分中学生身体素质差 | (1)充足的睡眠 (2)加强锻炼,增加户外活动 (3)吃饭定时,少吃零食 (4)养成讲卫生的习惯 |
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)生词:零食:non-staple food 卫生:hygiene (n.);
(3) 开头已经给出。
Dear friends,
We have found out the fact that
Thank you.
【答案】
Dear friends,
We have found out the fact that some middle school students are not kept in good health. But what should we do to improve our physical condition?
First of all, you should get enough sleep. You'd better go to bed and get up regularly. Don't stay up. Secondly, you should take more exercise and do more outdoor activities to strengthen your body. Thirdly, remember to have three meals regularly and eat less non-staple food, which will do good to you. Finally, you'd better form the habit of paying due attention to hygiene
If school students can do like that, I believe we will be strong and healthy and keep away from illnesses.
Thank you
【解析】
试题分析:写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语First of all首先;stay up熬夜;take exercise锻炼;do good to对、、有好处;form the habit of养成。。的习惯;We have found out the fact that some middle school students are not kept in good health这个句子that引导the fact的同位语从句;Thirdly, remember to have three meals regularly and eat less non-staple food, which will do good to you.这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句;