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16．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
When I was young，I want to be a great hero．But with lime goes by，things have changed．Now I've deeded to become a doctor which can help save people's lives．This job is helpfully and worth doing．And how to make it come true？
I know it is really big challenge．I will work hard and go all out for it．From now on I will spend on more time learning my lessons，so that I can go to your ideal university．On the same time I am going to read many books on medicines．I believe I will achieve my dream．

分析 本文主要讲述作者小时候想要成为英雄．但随着时间的流逝，作者想要成为医生．因此，作者决定为此努力学习，花更多的时间学习功课，以便能进入理想的大学．同时，也阅读一些医学书，作者相信一定会实现梦想的．

解答 When I was young，I want to be a great hero．But with lime goes by，things have changed．Now I've deeded to become a doctor which can help save people's lives．This job is helpfully and worth doing．And how to make it come true？
I know it is really∧big challenge．I will work hard and go all out for it．From now on I will spend on more time learning my lessons，so that I can go to your ideal university．On the same time I am going to read many books on medicines．I believe I will achieve my dream．
详解：
1．want改为wanted 考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
2．with改为as或goes改为going 考查词语用法．time goes by是句子，要用连词as；with是介词，用with复合结构，time与go之间是主谓关系，用现在分词作宾语补足语．
3．which改为who/that 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词doctor在从句中作主语，用关系代词who/that．
4．helpfully改为helpful 考查副词．be动词后用形容词作表语．
5．And改为But 考查连词．前后两个分句之间是转折关系而非并列关系，用连词but．
6．加a 考查冠词．challenge是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
7．去掉on 考查词语用法．spend是及物动词，后接宾语时不需要介词on．
8．your改为my/the 考查代词．本文是第一人称写，此处要有my/the进行限定或特指．
9．On改为At 考查介词．at the same time意为"同时； 一起"，是固定搭配．
10．medicines改为medicine 考查名词．medicine作"医学"讲时，是不可数名词，没有复数形式．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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