题目内容
4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
The biggest challenge I have overcome is stepping out of my comfort zone.In the year of 2013which I was 15,I joined an exchange student program.I sent to Germany alone and lived with the host family.
At first it was a huge failure for me.Thanks for my host mom,she helped me a lot.She told me some tips to make friends,such as joining a sports club and invited my classmates to watch a movie.Surprising,all of the tips she gave me work out!She also suggested that I can introduce my culture to my classmates.To my astonish,they were both interested in Chinese culture.
Gradually,my discomfort zone became a part of my comfort zone.
分析 本文主要讲述作者作为交换生到德国学习,在房东妈妈的帮助下逐渐适应了国外的生活.
解答 The biggest challenge I have overcome is stepping out of my comfort zone.In the year of 2013which I was 15,I joined an exchange student program.I∧sent to Germany alone and lived with the host family.
At first it was a huge failure for me.Thanks for my host mom,she helped me a lot.She told me some tips to make friends,such as joining a sports club and invited my classmates to watch a movie.Surprising,all of the tips she gave me work out!She also suggested that I can introduce my culture to my classmates.To my astonish,they were both interested in Chinese culture.
Gradually,my discomfort zone became a part of my comfort zone.
详解:
1.which改为when 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词the year of 2013指时间,在从句中作状语,用关系副词when.
2.加was 考查动词时态和语态.I与send之间是动宾关系,用被动语态,因动作发生在过去,要用一般过去时的被动语态.
3.the改为a 考查冠词.family是可数名词,其前加不定冠词a表示泛指.
4.for改为to 考查固定搭配.thanks to意为"由于;归功于",是固定搭配.
5.invited改为inviting 考查动名词.and是并列连词,它前后连接两个相同的语法成分,joining a sports club和inviting my classmates to watch a movie都是such as所列举的例子.
6.Surprising改为Surprisingly 考查副词.修饰句子要用副词.
7.work改为worked 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是已发生的事情,要用一般过去时态.
8.去掉can或can改为should 考查虚拟语气.suggest后接宾语从句时要用虚拟语气,从句中的谓语动词用should+动词原形,should可省略.
9.astonish改为astonishment 考查固定搭配.to one's astonishment意为"使某人惊讶的是",是固定搭配.
10.both改为all 考查词语用法.they指代classmates,用all.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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41.A.be st | B.precious | C.worst | D.fastest |
42.A.after | B.until | C.before | D.when |
43.A.optimistic | B.strong | C.powerful | D.enthusiastic |
44.A.thought | B.wondered | C.planned | D.doubted |
45.A.allowed | B.abandoned | C.admitted | D.accustomed |
46.A.everything | B.nothing | C.anything | D.something |
47.A.lovely | B.last | C.dear | D.favorite |
48.A.with | B.beyond | C.on | D.without |
49.A.regret | B.shock | C.terror | D.shame |
50.A.got up | B.picked up | C.ended up | D.came up |
51.A.up | B.around | C.back | D.down |
52.A.choice | B.answer | C.dream | D.direction |
53.A.perform | B.study | C.work | D.live |
54.A.decided | B.remembered | C.demanded | D.hoped |
55.A.leave | B.complete | C.take | D.stop |
56.A.year | B.month | C.week | D.moment |
57.A.recognize | B.realize | C.ensure | D.understand |
58.A.miss | B.forget | C.find | D.describe |
59.A.scene | B.joy | C.entertainment | D.luck |
60.A.experience | B.repeat | C.love | D.face |
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A. | I'd love to | B. | It's my pleasure | ||
C. | I'm with you on that | D. | It's up to you |
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A. | Never mind | B. | Not at all | C. | By no means | D. | By all means |