Question

1．假如你是中学生李津，家住天津．你的英国笔友Jason来信谈到了他的故乡London，并希望了解你家乡天津的情况．请你用英文写一封回信．
回信必须包括以下内容：
（1）自然情况：地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等；
（2）发展成就：经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等；
（3）存在问题：交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题等；
（4）对天津发展的看法：内容由考生自己拟定．
注意：
（1）请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；
 （2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
 （3）词数不少于100；书信格式已给出，不计入总词数．   
参考词汇：高层建筑 high-rise building．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：New bridges and roads have been built，high rise buildings standing inmany parts of the city．
                    高层建筑矗立在城市的各个角落．此处用buildings+standing 独立主格结构．
高分句型二：However，there are still some problems，such as heavy traffic in rush hours and severe air pollution，whichhave a bad influence on people's daily life．
                   however"然而"，表示转折，过渡词使用衔接上下文．
                   which指problems，关系代词充当主语，引导一个非限制定语从句．
较好的短语：more than happy，are available for，have a bad influence on，so that；

解答 Dear Jason，
        I'm more than happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London．Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Tianjin．
Located on the Haihe River，Tianjin is a beautiful place for people to live in．Its economy has been developing rapidly during the past ten years．New bridges and roads have been built，①high rise buildings standing in many parts of the city．More and more schools and hospitals are available for the native people．It is developing into a modern and charming city．②However，there are still some problems，such as heavy traffic in rush hours and severe air pollution，which have a bad influence on people's daily life．In my view，Tianjin should develop healthily and scientifically，so that we could have a better hometown in future．
Yours，
Li Jin

点评 考查提纲式作文．写好提纲式作文关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读所给提示，然后确定主题、文体、人称和时态．根据所给要点加上自己的想象力，灵活运用所学知识，采用不能表达方式将要点表达出来．同时，注意主次分明，语言准确简洁，使用一定衔接词，最后检查有无拼写错误．