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假定你是李华，在一个英文网络论坛上， 你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助，请根据帖子的内容、写作要点和要求回帖。

Grown-up        Post at 20-11-2011  21:18                             1#

Hi, everyone, I’m a Senior Grade Three student, and I am suffering from mental pressure these days, what should I do?                                                                            TOP

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写作要点：
1.  告诉Grown-up心理压力不可避免； 2. 告诉Grown-up心里压力的危害； 
3. 建议Grown-up应正确面对心理压力；4. 介绍你面对心里压力时所采取的措施。
注意： 1. 词数100左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi, Grown-up,
It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life.______________________
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Hope my ideas will work.

Answer 1

Hi, Grown-up,                                                                  
It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life. In my opinion, everyone will meet some mental pressure in their life. But if it lasts a long time, it may do harm to our body.
Whenever I meet pressure, I try to keep calm and think how to overcome it. Sometimes it is very effective. When I’m stressed out, I listen to music or do some sports. After that, I often find that my moods become much better. If I can’t overcome it, I will turn to my parents, teachers or good friends.
To sum up, we should face pressure bravely and overcome it actively. 
Hope my ideas will work.

解析试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文的话题是考生较为熟悉的学习的压力，要根据所给的要点做适当的扩充，在介绍具体措施的时候可以从多锻炼，增加睡眠的时间等角度出发做具体的阐述。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。
考点：考查半开放性作文写作
点评：半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。