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假定你是李华，在一个英文网络论坛上， 你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助，请根据帖子的内容、写作要点和要求回帖。

Grown-up        Post at 20-11-2011  21:18                             1#

Hi, everyone,    I’m a Senior Grade Three student, and I am suffering from mental pressure these days, what should I do?                                                                            TOP

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写作要点：

1.   告诉Grown-up心理压力不可避免； 2.  告诉Grown-up心里压力的危害； 

3.  建议Grown-up应正确面对心理压力；4.  介绍你面对心里压力时所采取的措施。

注意： 1. 词数100左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Hi, Grown-up,

It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life.______________________

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Hope my ideas will work.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Hi, Grown-up,                                                          

It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life. In my opinion, everyone will meet some mental pressure in their life. But if it lasts a long time, it may do harm to our body.

Whenever I meet pressure, I try to keep calm and think how to overcome it. Sometimes it is very effective. When I’m stressed out, I listen to music or do some sports. After that, I often find that my moods become much better. If I can’t overcome it, I will turn to my parents, teachers or good friends.

To sum up, we should face pressure bravely and overcome it actively. 

    Hope my ideas will work.

【解析】本文是关于高三学生学习压力的文章，这个话题是学生所分词熟悉的话题，具体很强的可写性，同时这也是一篇半开放性的作文，要点给的并不全，给了考生教大的发挥余地。在写作的过程中注意使用合适的连接词如：To sum up等；也要使用一些高级的句型如强调句型，状语从句等，让文章更有层次性。