题目内容
【题目】请根据下面四幅图内容,展开合理想象,写一篇短文,记述昨天发生在你叔叔身上的事。
注意:1、词数:100词左右;
2、参考词汇:驾照driving license
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【答案】My uncle and his friends had dinner together yesterday. He was so happy that he drank too much. However, when it was time to go home, he insisted on driving home himself.
It was midnight and very dark. Soon, my uncle found the car out of his control. Shortly after he was not able to set the road clearly; he drove into a tree along the road and got seriously injured. Luckily enough, he was rushed to the nearest hospital. When he came back to life, he found a policeman waiting for him. He had to turn in the driving license and wait to be punished by law. How regretful he was!
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。根据图画内容,记述发生在你叔叔身上的时。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般过去时。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
insist; out of control; shortly after; injure;luckily enough; rush to; come back to life; driving license
第三步:连词成句
1. He was so happy that he drank too much. However, when it was time to go home, he insisted on driving home himself.
2. It was midnight and very dark. Soon, my uncle found the car out of his control.
3. Shortly after he was not able to set the road clearly.
4. He drove into a tree along the road and got seriously injured.
5. Luckily enough, he was rushed to the nearest hospital.
6. When he came back to life, he found a policeman waiting for him.
7. He had to turn in the driving license and wait to be punished by law.
第四步:润色修改
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。