Question

6．"When should I begin to develop good habits？"a young boy asked his teacher．
"How old are you？"asked the teacher．
"Eight years old，sir．"answered the boy．
"Then you have just lost eight years，"the teacher replied．
There is no doubt that habits are formed at a very early age．When one is young，it is easy to gain good habits．
Good habits are practices that help us in our daily life．The habit of brushing one's teeth in the morning，for example，keeps one's teeth clean and prevents a bad smell which is unpleasant to others．Bad habits such as sticking one's tongue out，biting one's fingernails and picking one's nose，are unwelcome ways of behaving in front of others．If we want people to enjoy being with us，we should try to develop habits that are pleasant．
The habits we formed at an early age shape our character．Habits are like tributaries （细流） which flow into a river．The river is made up of all its tributaries； a person's character is made up of all habits that he or she has developed over the years．
【写作内容】
1、以约30个词概括本文内容；
2、以约120个词谈谈你对好习惯养成的看法，并包括以下要点：
（1）你认为好习惯重要吗，为什么？
（2）你身上有好习惯吗？
（3）怎样才能养成良好的习惯？
【写作要求】
1、作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2、作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称．
The author tells us that habits are formed when we are young and we should try to develop good habits，for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character（高分句型一）．（34 words）
I can't agree more with the author．A good habit can shape our character and improve our inner beauty．Therefore，I think it is of great significance to form a good habit．I have benefited much from my good habits，such as getting up early to read English aloud，reviewing lessons before going to bed every day．In the past，I didn't dare to speak English before others because of my poor pronunciation．I often did badly in my English tests．Thanks to my good habits，I have been making great progress．
Then，how can we form a good habit？Firstly，we should decide to fight against our laziness．Once we make up our minds to do something，never give up easily．Then，we have to be confident，believing we can become better．Last but not least，keep pushing ourselves．It may take a long period to form a good habit，but remember it is perseverance that makes us successful!（高分句型二）．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
The author tells us that habits are formed when we are young and we should try to develop good habits，for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character
作者告诉我们，习惯是在我们年轻的时候形成的，我们应该养成良好的习惯，因为它们有益于我们的日常生活，有助于我们塑造我们的性格．
高分句型二：
It may take a long period to form a good habit，but remember it is perseverance that makes us successful!．
让自己可以养成良好的习惯需要很长的时间，但记住它是毅力让我们成功．

解答 The author tells us that habits are formed when we are young and we should try to develop good habits，for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character（高分句型一）．（34 words）
    I can't agree more with the author．A good habit can shape our character and improve our inner beauty．Therefore，I think it is of great significance to form a good habit．I have benefited much from my good habits，such as getting up early to read English aloud，reviewing lessons before going to bed every day．In the past，I didn't dare to speak English before others because of my poor pronunciation．I often did badly in my English tests．Thanks to my good habits，I have been making great progress．
    Then，how can we form a good habit？Firstly，we should decide to fight against our laziness．Once we make up our minds to do something，never give up easily．Then，we have to be confident，believing we can become better．Last but not least，keep pushing ourselves．It may take a long period to form a good habit，but remember it is perseverance that makes us successful!（高分句型二）

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．