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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I'm Li Hua and I'm writing to apply forthe assistant post you advertised on Internet.
It is stated in my resume(简历), I graduated from Zhejiang University with outstanding academic performances. I have a good command of English, and which is an advantage when apply for a job like this. Among all the factor, cooperation is the most important strength of a good assistant. I think I do good in the team work and I'm good at communicate with different people. Besides, I once get a part-time job in 2012 in Shandong Province and gained some precious work experience.
Since your company attaches important to employees' creativity, that's an honor for me to be one of your staff. I'm so positive that I can be fit for the job if offered the chance. Thanks for your consideration.

Answer 1

【答案】Internet前面加the；It is stated 中的It改成As；去掉and或which改成it；apply改为applying；factor改为factors；do good in中的good改为well；communicate改为communicating；get改为got；important改为importance；that's改为it's
【解析】这是一封求职信，主要介绍了作者的简历和优势以及渴望得到这份工作。
①Internet前面加the 考查冠词。Internet是专有名词，应用定冠词the修饰。
②It is stated 中的It改成As 考查非限制性定语从句。根据下文的逗号前后分句判断，前分句应该成为As引导的非限制性定语从句。
③去掉and或which改成it 考查连词。根据从句不可以与主句之间由连词连接，故去掉and，也可将which改为it，这样前后分句成为并列句。
④apply改为applying考查非谓语动词。根据该句的主语I是apply的动作执行者，应用现在分词作时间状语，故改为applying。
⑤factor改为factors考查名词。factor是可数名词，all修饰，应用复数形式，故改为factors。
⑥do good in中的good改为well 考查固定短语。根据词组do wellin在某方面做得好，well是副词修饰动词do。故改为well。
⑦communicate改为communicating考查非谓语动词。根据begood at中的at为介词，后跟动词的ing形式作宾语，故改为communicating。
⑧get改为got 考查时态。根据上下文都是过去时，该句中的时间是2012，故应该用一般过去时，故改为got。
⑨important改为importance考查名词。根据attach是及物动词，后跟名词作宾语，故改为importance。
⑩that's改为it's 考查固定句型。根据句型It is an honour for sb to do sth某人做某事是一种荣誉判断that's改为it's。that不可做形式主语。