题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你负责的英语俱乐部拟在假期里组织主题为“Stay out of danger and enjoy a safe holiday”急救培训课程。请你用英语写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 时间和地点;
2. 培训内容(观看关于意外受伤的短片,专家教授急救技能等);
3. 培训课的意义。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Notice
To raise our awareness of safety and let us keep away from danger , a first aid training class, whose theme is “Stay out of danger and enjoy a safe holiday”, is scheduled to be held in the school lecture hall from 4:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. next Wednesday. At the beginning of the class, a short film will be shown, helping us students know what accidental injuries will frequently happen and what harm they will cause. After that, an expert will give a lecture on how to avoid such injuries. Then under his professional guidance, we will learn how to offer first aid to those who get injured. By attending the class, we can master some basic and practical first aid skills, which is beneficial to us. Don’t miss it.
The English club
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一则通知。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
人称:第一人称
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
结构:总分法
要点:1. 时间和地点;
2. 培训内容(观看关于意外受伤的短片,专家教授急救技能等);
3. 培训课的意义。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
raise awareness;keep away from;first aid;be scheduled to;from …to…;in the school lecture hall;at the beginning of;give a lecture;under one’s guidance;get injured;attend the class;be beneficial to等
第三步:连词成句
1. To raise our awareness of safety and let us keep away from danger , a first aid training class, whose theme is “Stay out of danger and enjoy a safe holiday”, is scheduled to be held in the school lecture hall from 4:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. next Wednesday.
2. At the beginning of the class, a short film will be shown, helping us students know what accidental injuries will frequently happen and what harm they will cause.
3. Then under his professional guidance, we will learn how to offer first aid to those who get injured.
4. By attending the class, we can master some basic and practical first aid skills, which is beneficial to us.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:At the beginning of;After that;Then;
2.表并列补充关系:and等
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改