Question

12．假如你是高二学生小王，在复习准备迎接期末考中遇到烦恼时，你的同学给过你很多鼓励和帮助，你深有感触．
现在请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文．要求如下：
1．你的烦恼
2．同学如何鼓励和帮助到你
3．你的感触
With the final-exam drawing near，___________________________________
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Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们以高二学生小王的身份，就在复习准备迎接期末考中遇到烦恼，同学给过你很多鼓励和帮助此事写一篇作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时，内容要点包括：你的烦恼，同学如何鼓励和帮助到你，你的感触．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为作者的烦恼以及同学的鼓励和帮助．第二部分为作者对此事的感触．
 重点短语与句型：
for fear that 生怕…
be  in low spirits情绪低落
 encourage sb  to do sth鼓励某人做某事
as long as只要
高分句型一：With the final-exam drawing near，I was feeling more and more stressed for fear that I would fail in the exam．此句用了with+宾语+宾语补足语
高分句型二：I believed no matter how hard I worked，I wouldn't pass the exam，which may disappoint my parents and teachers．此句用了no matter+疑问词引导让步状语从句
高分句型三：It was my classmate Tom who often chatted with me after class to make me relaxed and encouraged me to overcome myself此句用了强调句型it was…who…
高分句型四：What he said made me realize that whether to get higher exam marks is not my real goal此句结合了主语从句与宾语从句．

解答 With the final-exam drawing near，I was feeling more and more stressed for fear that I would fail in the exam．（高分句型一） I believed no matter how hard I worked，I wouldn't pass the exam，which may disappoint my parents and teachers．（高分句型二） Therefore，I was in low spirits．It was my classmate Tom who often chatted with me after class to make me relaxed and encouraged me to overcome myself．（高分句型三） Later on，I felt more relaxed without so much pressure．（作者的烦恼以及同学的鼓励和帮助）
    What he said made me realize that whether to get higher exam marks is not my real goal（高分句型四）．The most important thing is that one should always dream to be better．As long as I try my best and keep up the spirit of not giving up，everything is going well．（作者对此事的感触）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧