题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,与朋友Bob约好星期五下午一起去游泳,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 对不能赴约表示歉意;
2. 说明不能赴约的原因(原因自拟);
3. 另约时间及碰头地点去游泳。(时间及碰头地点自拟)
注意:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Bob,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to tell you that I cannot go swimming with you on Saturday afternoon. I have just received a phone call from my sister that she will come to visit me this Saturday. I have to meet her at the train station in the afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Are you free this Sunday afternoon? If so, we can go early so that we’ll have
time to see a film together after swimming. We can meet at the school gate at 2 o’clock. If it’s OK for you, please let me know. Or you can suggest another time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出,写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯,同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文是一封电子邮件,共两段,要点齐全,结构严谨,使用高级句子。I’m sorry to tell you that I cannot go swimming with you on Saturday afternoon.使用宾语从句;I have just received a phone call from my sister that she will come to visit me this Saturday. that引导同位语从句;If so, we can go early so that we’ll have time to see a film together after swimming.省略句和目的状语从句完美结合;If it’s OK for you, please let me know.条件句和祈使句使用得当。
