题目内容
【题目】微笑是世界语言,它可以给人勇气、信心、安慰…让人与人之间的相处更加和谐。请你用英语写一篇关于微笑的短文,次数100-120.要求如下:
1. 描述一次与微笑有关的经历;
2. 说说你的感受及微笑的意义。
注意:开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
Smiling is a universal language, which can give us courage, confidence and comforts.
【答案】
Smiling is a universal language, which can give us courage, confidence and comforts.
I still remember how upset I was when it was my turn to recite a poem before class. Feeling nervous and shy, I forgot almost everything. I decided to give in, but all my classmates, especially my teacher kept smiling at me encouragingly. Their smiles warmed me so much that I got over the difficulty and finally made it.
I think smiling not only makes us happy but also helps build up our confidence, which makes a difference to our life. Moreover, it will improve the relationship between us. It’s smiling that brings harmony to our life. Only when you smile at the world will the world smile back to you. Therefore, keep smiling and show your best to the world.
【解析】
试题分析:微笑是世界语言,它可以给人勇气、信心、安慰…让人与人之间的相处更加和谐。请你用英语写一篇关于微笑的短文,次数100-120.要求如下:1. 描述一次与微笑有关的经历;2. 说说你的感受及微笑的意义。要用通顺的英语句子把所提示的点写全,可根据内容要点适当增加细节,写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。一定避免全部使用简单句。注意:开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
【亮点说明】I still remember how upset I was when it was my turn to recite a poem before class.句中运用了宾语从句和时间状语从句;Feeling nervous and shy, I forgot almost everything.现在分词短语在句中做状语;I decided to give in, but all my classmates, especially my teacher kept smiling at me encouragingly.本句使用了并列句,再加上非谓语动词和高级副词的使用,让文章很上档次;Their smiles warmed me so much that I got over the difficulty and finally made it.句中巧妙地运用了结果状语从句;I think smiling not only makes us happy but also helps build up our confidence, which makes a difference to our life.宾语从句、动名词短语作主语、not only--- but also连接两个并列的谓语动词和非限制性定语从句神奇般地结合在一个句中;It’s smiling that brings harmony to our life.运用了强调句式;Only when you smile at the world will the world smile back to you.部分倒装的使用给文章增添光彩。
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