英语课上.老师要求同学相互修改作文．假设以下文章为你同桌所写.请你对其进行修改．文章中共有10处错误.每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧).并在此符号下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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7．英语课上，老师要求同学相互修改作文．假设以下文章为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改．文章中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dollywood is one of the most unique theme park in the world．Dollywood shows and celebrate America's traditional southeastern culture．Although Dollywood had rides，the park's main attraction is its culture．Famous country music groups perform here all year in indoor and outdoor theatres．People come all over America to see carpenters and other craftsmen make wood，glass and iron objects on the old-fashioned way．Visit the candy shop to try the same kind of candy where American southerners made 150years ago，or take a ride on the only steam-engine train still work in the southeast USA．You can even see beautiful bald eagles in the world's largest bald eagle preserve．And for those who like rides，Dollywood has one of the best old wood roller coasters，Thunderhead．It is world-famous for having the most length in the smallest space．Come to Dollywood to have a fun learning all about America's historical southeastern culture．

分析本文介绍了Dollywood主题公园里面的一些基本设施，吸引越来越多的人参观．

解答 Dollywood is one of the most unique theme park in the world．Dollywood shows and celebrate America's traditional southeastern culture．Although Dollywood had rides，the park's main attraction is its culture．Famous country music groups perform here all year in indoor and outdoor theatres．People come∧all over America to see carpenters and other craftsmen make wood，glass and iron objects on the old-fashioned way．Visit the candy shop to try the same kind of candy where American southerners made 150years ago，or take a ride on the only steam-engine train still work in the southeast USA．You can even see beautiful bald eagles in the world's largest bald eagle preserve．And for those who like rides，Dollywood has one of the best old wood roller coasters，Thunderhead．It is world-famous for having the most length in the smallest space．Come to Dollywood to have a fun learning all about America's historical southeastern culture．
详解：
1 park改为parks 考察名词单复数．句子里有one of 修饰，所以名词需用复数形式．
2 celebrate改为celebrates 考察时态．celebrate与show是两个并列谓语，所以用一般现在时．
3 had改为has 考察时态．本文叙述的是Dollywood 主题公园，所以需一般现在时即可．
4 here改为there 考生指示代词．here指这里，不符合，介绍Dollywood 主题公园，所以用那里there．
5 come 后加 from 考察介词．此处为固定短语 come from意为来自于．
6 on改为in 考察介词．句子里表示用古老的方式，in the…way意为用什么的方式，方法．
7 where改为that/which 考察连接词．分析句式可知，此处为定语从句，make缺少宾语，所以用which．
8 work改为working 考察动名词．train和work之间是主动关系，所以用现在分词．
9 wood改为wooden 考察形容词．用来修饰过山车，需用形容词wooden，意为木头的．
10 去掉a 考察冠词，fun为不可数名词，前不能用冠词．