题目内容
14.假定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现在正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员.请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信,内容应包括:个人情况:年龄、性别、学历;
个人条件:英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况;
承诺:提供最佳服务.
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
参考词汇:申请apply (v.),application (n.);志愿者volunteer
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现在正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员.请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:个人情况:年龄、性别、学历;个人条件:英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况;承诺:提供最佳服务.
2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:a college student大学生;have a keen interest in对…感兴趣;look forward to盼望;Besides另外,除此之外;What's more而且;am familiar with对…熟悉;participate in参加;apply for申请
As a college student,I have a keen interest in sports and I have always been looking forward to the Games to be held here.(高分句型一)
With the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports,I suppose I am qualified to be a volunteer for the Games.(高分句型二)
I promise I will offer the best service to whoever participates in the Games.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. I am a girl of 18.As a college student,I have a keen interest in sports and I have always been looking forward to the Games to be held here.(高分句型一)(个人情况)
With the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports,I suppose I am qualified to be a volunteer for the Games.(高分句型二)Besides,I have a good communicative competence and I am considered to be an outgoing,reliable and helpful person in our school.(个人条件)What's more,I am familiar with the local conditions.I promise I will offer the best service to whoever participates in the Games.(高分句型三) (承诺)Now I formally apply for the job and I sincerely hope I can be accepted.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.