Question

2．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
     2．只允许修改10处，多者 （从第11处起） 不计分．
When I was in the junior middle school，I didn't have any good friends．As a result，I often feel lonely．Now as a senior middle school student，I want to make a change．I want to have any good friends．But I'm not good at deal with others，which means I don't know how to make friends．Last week，when I was taking a walk，a girl of my age at the playground walked toward me．She seemed very nicely．I hoped she would be my friend，and I didn't have the courage talk to her．What I wish someone would give me some helpful advices!

Answer 1

分析 本文讲述了作者在初中没有朋友，希望在高中能交些朋友，但不知道如何办，希望有人能给出些建议．

解答 When I was in the junior middle school，I didn't have any good friends．As a result，I often feel lonely．Now as a senior middle school student，I want to make a change．I want to have any good friends．But I'm not good at deal with others，which means I don't know how to make friends．Last week，when I was taking a walk，a girl of my age atthe playground walked toward me．She seemed very nicely．I hoped she would be my friend，and I didn't have the courage∧talk to her．What I wish someone would give me some helpful advices!
详解：
1．去掉the 考查冠词．"在初中"用英语表达是"in junior middle school"，不用冠词．
2．feel改为felt 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是已发生的事情，要用一般过去时态．
3．any改为some 考查限定词．some用于肯定句，any用于否定句或疑问句．
4．deal改为dealing 考查动名词．at是介词，后接动词时要用动名词形式．
5．at改为in/on 考查介词．"在操场上"用英语表达是"in/on the playground"．
6．nicely改为nice 考查形容词．seem是连系动词，后接形容词作表语，副词nicely的形容词是nice．
7．and改为but 考查连词．前后两个单句是转折关系，而非并列关系．
8．加to 考查动词不定式．have the courage to do sth．意为"有勇气做某事"．
9．What改为How 考查感叹句．How+主语+谓语！此时how是副词，用来修饰其后的形容词或副词，也可以修饰动词． what感叹名词．
10．advices改为advice 考查名词．advice是不可数名词，没有复数形式．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．