Question

假设你是李华，你的朋友Lily正在上中学，她感到学习压力很大，她向你询问有关怎样减压的建议，请根据下面表格内的提示用英文写一封回信，

原因	什么原因产生了压力
建议	1. 看电视 2. 听音乐，放松心情 3. 适当进行体育运动
总结	正确看待压力

 

注意：

1．开头和结尾已给出；

2．词数：100个左右；

3．参考词汇：压力pressure;  建议suggestion; 作运动 do sports exercise

Dear Lily,

       In the letter, you asked me something about your study pressure.     

                                                                            

Yours,

LiHua.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 Dear Lily,

In the letter, you asked me something about study pressure. It's a big problem which needs to solve. I have some suggestions for you.

In order to relax ourselves，first we can turn to some of our hobbies，different students have different ways --- Some watch TV，some listen to music. But for me I enjoy taking exercise most. Whenever I feel tired，I always spend an hour （in） walking or jogging in the park. Besides, I also play table tennis with my friends after class. In my opinion, taking exercise can not only rest our brains and eyes but also help build our bodies. I think it’s really helpful to both my health and my study. Last but not least, to be confident and believe yourselves. Confidence can help you to study easier.

I hope you can treat pressure properly. If you can do it like this, you will succeed sooner or later.

Yours,

LiHua. 

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类短文写作。在分析原因的时候可以从升学压力大，父母要求高，学校对于学习抓得很紧等方面着手。在写作原因和建议的时候，一定要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使之成为一个整体，最后一段要表明要正确面对压力，要有正确的心态和减压的措施。

考点：考查提纲类短文写作

点评：提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括在内，不能有遗漏。要合理的谋篇布局，准确的分段分析，使用合适的连接词来连接全文，运用高级的词汇和句型让文章更有文采。