题目内容
2.假如你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们国重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival).请给外教Lucy写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包括:1.出发及返回时间;
2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等.
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.结语已为你写好.
Dear Lucy,
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua.
分析 这是一封邀请信.根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般将来时为主.内容包括:一提出邀请; 二 活动内容;三出发及返回时间.
高分句型:
1.I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.句子里a visit to 表示"参观某地",等于动词"visit".
我想要邀请你和我们在下周六去敬老院陪老人们国重阳节.
2..We'll also spend some fun time together singing,dancing and playing games,which we hope will make them happy.句子里spend…doing表示"花费时间做某事"; which 引导非限制性定语从句,代指主句.
我们将会一起唱歌跳舞做游戏,我们希望这会让老人们高兴.
解答 Dear Lucy,
I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.【高分句型一】(提出邀请)It is the day for the elderly in our culture.We'll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there.We'll also spend some fun time together singing,dancing and playing games,which we hope will make them happy.【高分句型二】(活动内容)We should be back around 4 o'clock in the afternoon.If you are able to come with us,please let us know and we'll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.(出发及返回时间)
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
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