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17．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
The"only child"policy has been changed in our country．It is possible that some of us may have a brother and sister．In a survey about the acceptance of a sibling，most of my classmate say yes．They are very glad to have a companion at home，with which they will no longer feel lonely．Beside，they can learn to offer help to others．However，the few who say no is afraid that their parents would love them less whether they had a sibling．
 As for me，there be a younger brother and sister at home，I will be very happy．For one thing，a little child is a great fun and I can play with him or her cheerful．For another，I will have an intimate friend to share my life．How nice it is to grow up with a sibling!

分析 文章大意：在我们国家，计划生育政策作了改变，现在我们中的一些人有可能有弟弟妹妹．在一个调查中，我们大多数的同学是接受弟弟妹妹的．他们非常高兴能有一个同伴，有了伙伴，再也不会感到孤独．另外，他们可以学会给其他人提供帮助．然而有些人拒绝，是害怕父母对他们的爱会少了．，

解答 The"only child"policy has been changed in our country．It is possible that some of us may have a brother and sister．In a survey about the acceptance of a sibling，

most of my classmate say yes．They are very glad to have a companion at home，withwhichthey will no longer feel lonely．Beside，they can learn to offer help to
                  classmates                                                                                             whom                                                 Besides
others．However，the few who say no is afraid that their parents would love them lesswhetherthey had a sibling．
                                                          are                                                                    if
As for me，there be a younger brother andsister at home，I will be very happy．For one thing，a little child is a great fun and I can play with him or her cheerful．
                          being                         or                                                                                                                                                                  cheerfully
For another，I will have an intimate friend to sharemy life∧．How nice it is to grow up with a sibling!
                                                                                    with
1．classmate-classmates．考查名词单复数．在classmate前面有most of，所以应该用复数形式．
2．which-whom．考查定语从句．定语从句中，现行词是指人时，放在介词后需要用whom．
3．Beside-Besides．考查副词．本句中表示另外，需要用副词而不是介词．
4．is-are．考查主谓一致．本句中的主语是the few （classmates），所以谓语动词应该用are．
5．whether-if．考查条件状语从句．本句中表示如果有弟弟或妹妹，他们害怕父母给他们的爱就会少了．所以用if．whether是表示是否，一般引导名词性从句或让步状语从句．
6．be-being．考查非谓语动词．在本句中，主句是后面的"I will be very happy"，所以前面应该用独立主格结构．所以用there being．
7．and-or．考查并列连词．此处表示选择而非并列．所以用or．
8．去掉great前面的a．考查冠词．fun是不可数名词，所以前面不需要用不定冠词．
9．cheerful-cheerfully．考查副词．此处修饰前面的动词短语，所以应该用副词形式．
10．在life后面加with．考查动词和介词搭配．share sth with sb 是固定短语搭配．

点评 本篇短文改错考查冠词，动词形式，名词单复数，非谓语动词，主谓一致等，平时注重多积累，答题时结合句意和语法进行分析，答完后通读，是否通顺，符合逻辑．

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