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16.假如你是李磊,你的初中好友韩梅梅去美国读书后你们失去了联系,最近你得知 了他的邮箱地址,请给她写一封邮件,要点如下:
1.问候对方,表达思念之情
2.回忆两人的友情
3.希望两人能继续保持联系. 
注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 
3.开头已给出,但不计入总词数.

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
No man can make the most of his life without carefully and conscientiously striving to win the right kind of friends as he goes along.
没有人
可以充分利用他的生活当他在生活中不够谨慎小心去结交合适的朋友.
高分句型二:
In short,when we have established friendship,we ought to cherish and treasure it by means of words and deeds.
总之,当我们建立了友谊,我们应该用言行来珍惜和珍惜它.

解答 Dear Hanmeimei:
Friendship is a kind of human relations.It is a human instinct to make friends.When in trouble,we need friends to offer us help,support and encouragement.With success achieved,we also need friends to share our joys.
Friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy.It implies loyalty,cordiality,sympathy,affection,and readiness to help.No man can make the most of his life without carefully and conscientiously striving to win the right kind of friends as he goes along(高分句型一).
Knowing how valuable friendship is,we should be very careful in making friends.Real friends are those who have good character,superior ability and kindness of heart.Real friends can share all our sorrows and double all our joys.While making friends,we should take care to select those who have such fine qualities.Then we should treat our friends with courtesy,be careful not to interfere unreasonably with them,and not to ridicule their proceedings.We should forgive their failures and do our best to help them.In short,when we have established friendship,we ought to cherish and treasure it by means of words and deeds(高分句型二).Only thus,can we develop real friendship and keep the sacred lamp of friendship burning all our life.
                                                                                                                 your frend
                                                                                                                 Lilei

点评 本书面表达为议论文,议论文是对某现象或观点进行点评.写作时,应注意按提出、分析、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排文章结构,使用足够的论据来分层次论证自己的观点.

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