Question

17．请描述如图所示的图片，并谈谈你的感受．

Answer 1

分析 本文为看图作文，主题是"要用积极乐观的心态面对生活"．写作时可按"三段式"来写，首先描述图片点明主题，然后分析概述其含义，发表感想．基本时态为一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主．重要短语：do some actions （做一些动作…），look like…（看上去像…），be faced with （面临，面对），manage to do （成功地做某事），have a positive attitude toward…（对…有积极的态度），have great influence on（有很大影响），keep peace（保持平静）．

解答 As is vividly shown in the picture，an old granny who looks ugly in a wheelchair does some actions．The actions reflect on the wall，which makes her look like a young beautiful girl．（描述图片）【高分句型】
The picture conveys that some people are positive when they are faced with life．They are always so energetic and enterprising that they manage to finish most of tasks well．Life returns color to those people who have positive and optimistic attitudes toward life．（联系实际，反映问题）【高分句型】
Now that a positive attitude can lead us a better life，how can we develop a positive attitude？For one thing，we should hold a dream about future to provide our life a clear direction．For another，it is necessary for us to be confident which is the energy of life，perhaps the beauty of life．【高分句型】Whether we can find it have a great influence on our attitude towards life，so we should keep peace in our heart to find the beauty of life．In my opinion，if we can do like that mentioned above，better life will hug us tightly．（观点）

点评 写作看图作文时，首先认真看图，结合图片和文字，确定所要表达的主题是什么，然后围绕主题，提炼要点，合理想象，对译出的要点通过合理的组合，加上必要的连接词使表达连贯．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．