Question

11．假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I'mvery glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before．I have been thinking about the question you ask me．On my opinion，you should come back after finished your studies abroad．For one reason，that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our country．It will be quite easily for you to find a good job．In fact，I know a few big company in our city are hoping to hire people like you．For another reason，I think it will be too much more convenient for me to look after your parents as they are getting old．But this is only my point．It is up to you make a right choice．

Answer 1

分析 很高兴收到你两周前的来信．我一直在考虑你问的问题，在我看来，你在国外深造后应该回来．一方面，你学习的东西正是我们国家急需的，你很容易找到一份好工作．实际上，我知道有好几家大公司想雇佣你这样的人．另一方面，我认为你的父母老了，回来后照顾他们也方便些．这只是我的观点，你会作出正确的选择．

解答 I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before．
                                                                                            ago
I have been thinking about the question you askme．On my opinion，
                                                                asked      In
you should come back after finished your studies abroad．For one reason，
                                         finishing
that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our country．
what
It will be quite easily for you to find a good job．In fact，
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I know a few big company in our city are hoping to hire people like you．
                         companies
For another reason，I think it will be too much more convenient
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for meto look after your parents as they are getting old．
     you
But this is only my point．It is up to you∧make a right choice．
                                                             加to
1．before改为ago．句意表达的是过去，before是完成时态的时间状语．
2．ask改为asked．句意表达的是过去的动作，要用一般过去时态．
3．On改为In．短语搭配，in my opinion在我看来．
4．finished改为finishing．句中finish位于介词after后，要用动名词．
5．that改为what．句中what you are studying是一个主语从句，从句中study缺少宾语，要用连接代词what．
6．easily改为easy．句中easy是作系动词的宾语，要用形容词形式．
7．company改为companies．句中有a few修饰，表示几家大公司，名词要用复数．
8．too去掉．much修饰比较级表示程度，too多余．
9．me改为you．逻辑指代错误，句意指代的是说话对方．
10．加to． 句型搭配，it is up to you to do sth由你决定做某事，it是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的动词不定式．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．