假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的一下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(︿).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词,2.只允许修� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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2．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Ms．J．K．Rowling，
It is great pleasure to write to you．I like reading all of your Harry Potter book．A few days before，I listened to a radio programme about you．Now I know that you teach English at home and in others countries before you started writing books．I also know that you could only write the first book while your baby daughter was asleep，so you worked on them for five years．That was a very much difficult job．Your son David and your daughter Jessica must be proud for you．I hope I can become as successfully as you when I grow up．Thank you for spending time read my letter．
Yours sincerely，
Michele．

分析这是一封写给罗琳的信．我很喜欢读你的哈利波特，几天前，我在广播中听了你的故事，知道了你的一些情况．我为你感到骄傲，我希望自己长大了和你一样成功．谢谢你读我的信．

解答 Dear Ms．J．K．Rowling，
It is︿great pleasure to write to you．I like reading all of your Harry Potter book．A few days before，I listened to a radio programme about you．Now I know that you teach English at home and in otherscountries before you started writing books．I also know that you could only write the first book while your baby daughter was asleep so you worked on themfor five years．That was a very much difficult job．Your son David and your daughter Jessica must be proud for you．I hope I can become as successfullyas you when I grow up．Thank you for spending time read my letter．
详解：
1．加a；冠词错误．it is a great pleasure to do sth很开心做某事．
2．book改为books；名词错误．句意表达的是复数．
3．before改为ago；副词错误．句意表达的是过去，a few days ago几天前；before通常用于完成时态中．
4．teach改为taught；时态错误．句意表达的是过去的事实，要用一般过去时态．
5．others改为other；形容词错误．句中other修饰名词countries，要用形容词形式．
6．them改为it；代词错误．句意指代的是the first book，要用it来指代．
7．much去掉；副词错误．very much不能放在形容词前作修饰语，通常修饰的是动词．
8．for改为of；短语搭配错误．be proud of为…而自豪．
9．successfully改为successful；形容词错误．句中successful作系动词become的表语，要用形容词形式．
10．read改为reading；短语搭配错误．spend some time（in）doing sth花时间做某事．

点评短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．

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