题目内容
假设你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记,记述你周末或在假期中帮助家人做家务的一次经历。
写作要点: 1. 做家务的理由;2.做家务的过程;3.你的感受。
注意:1.词数不少于100 字;2.开头已给不计入总词数;3.不可写真实姓名。注意时态。
I am an 18-year-old middle school student. ______________________________
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I am an 18-year-old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.
Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly, I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.
At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was , I never felt so happy.
【解析】
试题分析:本文属于记叙文,叙述周末在家帮助家人做家务的经历。要使用一般过去时和第一人称。要包括:1. 做家务的理由;2.做家务的过程;3.个人感受。可以根据本人实际情况做适当发挥。上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
亮点说明:范文中使用了高级句式,如Tired as I was , I never felt so happy.另外还使用了一些好的连接词,如firstly, then等让文章成为一个整体。
考点:半开放性作文