题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文,主要内容包括:
1.乐观的人生态度; 2.努力学习; 3.参加体育锻炼。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 文章的开头已给出不计入总次数。
We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.
【答案】
We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.
Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in face of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power, we can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.
【解析】试题分析:假设你是李华,准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。按要求写一篇短文,主要内容包括:乐观的人生态度、.努力学习、.参加体育锻炼。这是一篇明显的提纲作文,就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块,以条目的形式列出以进行写作。考生在审题的时候应该注意审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。题文已经告知要求,那么文体应为议论文,即对健康成长的看法;又根据“你是李华” 写作时即用第一人称“我”,即李华;时态主要用一般现在时即可或一般将来时。考生在写作时应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型,将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识,避开生僻的词汇,并克服母语的干扰,按照英语的习惯方式,用地道的英语表达出来,力求做到语言准确无误。然后根据要点选词组句,然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。
【亮点说明】本文语言凝练,论点鲜明,条理层次清晰。文章第一段就开门见山切入了健康成长的主题。第二段具体阐释了应该如何健康成长的方法。Firstly、secondly..直接摆出观点。文章多出使用了if引导的条件状语从句,说明了努力学习和锻炼的重要性:If we have the power, we can help to build our country and enjoy life better. (如果我们拥有知识的力量,我们就能更好地帮助建设国家和享受生活)If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.(如果我们好好做了这些事情,我们将能够快乐而健康地成长)。高级短语和结构:develop a good attitude to life培养良好的生活态度,be brave in face of difficulties勇敢地面对困难;再如Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times.生活不仅充满了阳光也有艰难的时光。not only…but also连接两个并列结构,阐释了生活的双面性,饱含哲理,引人深思。最后一句再次点明主题,首尾呼应。
【题目】请根据句意,选择方框中的单词,用其正确的形式填入下面的句子的空白处,并将答案写在相应位置。
absorb, intend, accuse, approach, amuse, conclude, thorough |
【1】This dictionary is __________ for senior high students.
【2】It’s too cold for children to play outside today, so they have to __________ themselves indoors.
【3】Tony __________ Julia, touched her shoulder and kissed her on the cheek!
【4】Once my neighbour next door __________ me of playing the piano too loudly in my room.
【5】Having been __________ cleaned, the garden looked more beautiful than ever before.
【6】It seems reasonable to __________ that people’s behaviour is influenced by what they see on TV.
【7】He was so __________ in reading a novel that he didn’t notice his teacher coming up to him.