题目内容
假如你叫李华,你的一位美国留学生朋友Peter邀请你参加本周日在他家举办的生日聚会,但你不能参加,请根据以下内容给他写一封电子邮件:
表达想参加的意愿
说明不能参加的理由(至少2个)
表示歉意并另约时间
注意:
词数100左右;
可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;
开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter
I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party this Sunday.
Best regards,
Li Hua
Dear Peter
I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party this Sunday. It is very kind of you to invite me to your house and I hopefully want to celebrate your birthday with you and express my best wishes to you. Much to my regret, I will be absent from your party owing to the fact that the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, for which I am now quite busy preparing. What’s worse, I have caught a bad cold lately and I am really not myself.
I am truly sorry. I hope you will forgive me and accept my sincere apologies. I believe we will have many more chances to get together. Shall we make it after the Exam?
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是一篇提纲类作文,要求根据所给的提示内容写一封电子邮件。根据提示的信息可知,文章应按照书信的格式写,内容包括:表达想参加的意愿、说明不能参加的理由、表示歉意并另约时间
等几个方面。本文是一则书信,所以用第一人称,以一般现在时为主。写作时要充分发挥想象,适当的添加自己的观点,使文章内容丰满,并达到要求的字数。此外为了提高文章档次,还要注意使用多种句式和高级词汇,并添加关联词让行文流畅。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达使用了三段式结构,开门见山地表达想参加的意愿并说明了不能参加的理由;第二段表达了歉意并另约时间;第三段则盼望得到答复。本文的亮点是运用了恰当的关联词,如What’s worse 等让文章衔接自然;It is very kind of ... 、I’m looking forward to、Shall we...?和宾语从句等结构的运用也为文章增添了亮色。
考点:考查提纲作文