题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你所在的国际学校打算举行一次为期七天的“走进世界名校”的夏令营活动。请你给美籍校长Roy写一封信申请参加。内容包括:
1.你对夏令营活动的了解(参观名校,听教授演讲和交外国朋友等);
2.参加的意愿和理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Roy,
I'm glad to know that you are going to hold a seven-day summer camp called "Walking into the World-famous Campus".
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr Roy,
I'm glad to know that you are going to hold a seven-day summer camp called "Walking into the World-famous Campus".From what I understand,there are varieties of wonderful activities such as visiting famous universities, attending professors' lectures,making foreign friends and so on,which I think are of great use to us high school students.
I have great interest in it.The reason is that I can gain much knowledge and experience from activities.What's more,it will encourage me to study harder and improve my communication skills.
Thanks for your reading my application.I hope I will have a chance to take part in the activity.I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时,要注意以下几点:1. 通篇以一般现在时态为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词,使上下文行文流畅,衔接自然流程。3. 注意语气。既然这是一封申请信,所以要注意语气应该比较恳切。
【范文亮点】
范文采取了非限定性定语从句which I think are of great use to us high school students等句式。
The reason is that I can gain much knowledge and experience from activities.表语从句的使用
3. 文章采用了are of great use,what's more等高级单词或短语。