题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,得知你校的校报在高一新生中招聘英语小记者的消息,于是你写了一篇应聘信,用英语介绍自己,内容如下:
1.现年16岁,高一(1)班,任班长。
2.爱好英语阅读,订阅了各种英文报纸。
3.能与外宾自由交谈,曾在初中举办的英语口语比赛中获一等奖。
4.自己能胜任这项工作,如能录用,一定努力工作。
要求:(1)词数:100 (文章开头与结尾已给出,不记入词数)。
(2)订阅subscribe 英语口语比赛Oral English Competition
Dear editor,
Recently I have learnt that you need little reporters from the new students in Grade 1. I’d like to be one. Now I’d like to introduce myself to you.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear editor,
Recently I have learnt that you need little reporters from the new students in Grade 1. I’d like to be one. Now I’d like to introduce myself to you.
My name is Li Hua. I’m sixteen years old. I’m monitor of Class 1, Grade 1. It is six years since I began to learn English. I enjoy reading English articles, and have subscribed all kinds of English newspapers, which I devote all my spare time to reading. What’s more, I can talk with foreign friends in English. I’m pleased to tell you that I have won the first prize in the Oral English Competition held in my junior middle school, which encourage me a lot. I’m sure I will be fit for the job. I’ll do my best if I am accepted.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】本文为求职信。求职信是一种书信文体,求职信一般有以下几部分:
1、写好开头。首先简明扼要说明你是在何家媒体看到应聘广告以及所要应聘职位的名称,并写明你对招聘单位有兴趣并想应聘他们空缺的职位。
2、自我介绍并证明自己的能力。通常在这段里介绍你的工作经验及才能,特别是那些满足所应聘单位需要的才能。推销要适度,不能夸大其词。
3、结尾部分,求职者应重申对所应聘职位的热情。
亮点说明:本文结构完整,要点齐全。句式灵活多变。简单句与复杂句(I’m pleased to tell you that I have won the first prize in the Oral English Competition held in my junior middle school, which encourage me a lot)并存。既有非谓语中的过去分词作定语(the Oral English Competition held in my junior middle school),又有各种复合句,如:固定句式中(It is +一段时间+since …);非限制性定语从句如 which I devote all my spare time to reading及名词从句(I’m sure I will be fit for the job.)和状语从句(I’ll do my best if I am accepted)。此外文中还运用了一些短语及连词,增强文章的逻辑性,提高文章的可读性。
