题目内容
14.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
(2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
A city,whether big and small,should be clean.Only when we live in a clean city we live a happy life.As we know,a clean city,that disease may be reduced and people's health may be better,are good both for our mind and body.No one believes people lived in a dirty city with waste everywhere can live happy.However,with more and more people moved into our city,it is not easy to keep our city clean.Beside,some factories will pour waste into the air,the river and onto the ground,making it is hard to keep our city clean.To make our city the better place to live in,we still have a lot to do.
分析 作者在文中告诉我们,一个城市无论大与小,作为我们生存的环境都必须是清洁干净的,只有这样我们才能生活得更舒服.然而随着城市人口的增多,城市垃圾也随之增多,另外工厂也排出废气废物,所以要想使我们的城市更好,我们还有很多的工作去做.
解答 A city,whether big and small,should be clean.Only when we live in a clean city∧we live a happy life.As we know,a clean city,that disease may be reduced and people's health may be better,are good both for our mind and body.No one believes people lived in a dirty city with waste everywhere can live happy.However,with more and more people moved into our city,it is not easy to keep our city clean.Beside,some factories will pour waste into the air,the river and onto the ground,making it is hard to keep our city clean.To make our city the better place to live in,we still have a lot to do.
详解:
1.and改为or;考查连词,whether…or…是固定搭配,意为"不管…还是…".
2.we 前加can/will;考查倒装句,副词only位于句首句子用半倒装,即把助动词或情态动词提到主要的前面,所以此处在we 前加can/will构成倒装句.
3.that改为where;考查定语从句,此处用关系副词where在定语从句中作状语.
4.are改为is;考查主谓一致,主语是前面的a clean city,故动词用单数形式is.
5.lived改为living;考查非谓语动词,这里是分词短语作后置定语,people与动词live是主谓关系,故用现在分词形式.
6.happy改为happily;考查副词,此处用副词作状语修饰动词live.
7.moved改为moving;考查with复合结构,这是"with+名词+分词"的复合结构,名词 people 与动词move是主谓关系,故用现在分词形式构成复合结构.
8.Beside改为Besides;考查形近词辨析,beside意为"在…旁边",besides意为"除…之外",分析句意为"另外,工厂排放废物…",故此处用besides.
9.去掉 is;考查句式结构,这里代词it是make的宾语,hard是it的宾语补足语,故把is去掉.
10.the改为a;考查冠词,此处用a表示泛指,"一个更好的居住的地方".
点评 短文改错首先快速阅读短文,了解短文基本大意,确定文章的基本时态,再运用语法,词汇,习惯性短语等基础知识进一步分析各个句子,找出文中的错误加以修改
A. | when | B. | why | C. | which | D. | that |
-He stormed out of the office I could get in a word.( )
A. | since | B. | when | C. | before | D. | after |
A. | something | B. | anything | C. | nothing | D. | everything |