题目内容
【题目】
【写作内容】
目前,学校存在少数学生作弊的现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文,标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations.”请根据下列提示用英语写一篇英文稿。
内容要点如下:
【写作要求】
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Though it is a pity, we’ve to regretfully admit that now a few students like cheating when they’re having exams at school & I think there are some reasons for them to do so. However, the most possible ones may go like this: there are too many exams which are too difficult but some of the students are often lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. So when taking exams, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.
In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in exams because it breaks the rules of schools & and we students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in exams. What's more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for exams.
【解析】
试题分析:本次作文为提纲作文。写作对象:考试中的作弊现象,贴近学生生活,且写作要点要求具体,考生应是有话可说。因为所写为目前存在形象,所以本文的基本时态应为一般现在时。另外,要注意表述的条理性。
写作亮点:该篇范文,要点全面,采用两段式,层次感强且做到了主次分明。此外,该篇文章用语恰当(例如:“Though it is a pity, we’ve to regretfully admit that…”)。更难能可贵的是,其连接性词/短语的合理使用(例如:“However, In my opinion, What's more,”)及句式的恰到好处的转换(例如:定语从句“there are too many exams which are too difficult”,省略句“So when taking exams, they sometimes cheat”)使得文章连贯而自然,实为考场中的上乘之作。
【题目】根据所读内容在文章后图表中的空格里填入最恰当的单词。注意:每空1个单词。
Introduction to anger
Anger is a natural reaction which comes out when we feel that we have not been given a fair treatment. The positive side of this negative emotion is that it has helped us to evolve as humans and cope in a better manner with our surroundings. However, it tends to become a problem when we fail to control it. Many a time it happens that your anger has hurt others or has spoiled one of your relationships for which you regret later. It has some bad effects on the health, too.
We should control anger so that it does not cause harm to us or to those around us whom we love. One of the best ways to control anger is to get help from others. If you feel that you are unable to manage your anger, it can make you more upset. So tell someone that is close to you, a friend or a family member, about your problem. When you discuss a matter with others, there is a better chance of finding a solution to your problem. Besides, there are no better stress relievers than humor. When you feel that it is because of stress that your anger is becoming unmanageable, you can use humor. It can help you look at difficult things in a lighter way and you will feel better about the things around you.
Anger tends to make us have a lot of negative thoughts. Therefore, we have to change the negative thoughts into positive ones. For this you have to first refuse all the negative thoughts that are in your mind one by one. This can be done with a lot of practice. Once you are successful in that, you have to maintain your focus only on the positive things of life.
Meditation (冥想) is an excellent anger management technique. In addition, what we do is disconnect ourselves from the outer world and focus all our attention into the inner world. This helps us develop a sense of controlling our thoughts that tend to cause anger.
【1】 | Anger is a natural reaction which comes out when we have been treated【2】. | |
Positive sides | ﹡Help us evolve as humans. | |
【4】sides | ﹡Hurt others. | |
Some ways to【6】your anger | Get help from others | Discuss your problems with your friend or a |
Use【8】 | It can help you see difficult things in a【9】way. | |
Think【10】 | Refuse all the negative thoughts and focus only on positive things. | |
Practice meditation | Help us control our thoughts which tend to cause anger. |