[题目]短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分.满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有 10 处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉.修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir,

I’m glad to learn that part-time assistants was wanted in your studio and I’d like to have a try.

I’m a student who is graduated from high school soon. Before attending the college, I’ll have a long holiday and I’m determined to make the best of them. Since childhood, I have developed a strong interest in storytelling and watching films. My teacher thinks highly of my performance in the language class, when I have also acquired a good knowledge of American movie industry. Except that, I am the monitor of my class and thus have gained many experience in management.

I will undertake full responsibility and spare no effort to do my share of work. I am full convinced that through communication with the staffs, I can get some valuable work experience as well as develop my social skills.

I’m looking forward receiving your reply soon. Thank you for your consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

【1】was→are

【2】graduated→Graduating

【3】去掉the

【4】them→it

【5】when→where

【6】Except→Besides

【7】many→much

【8】full→fully

【9】staffs→staff

【10】加to

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇求职信，由于我即将高中毕业，迎来一个漫长的假期，因此想找份兼职工作，我在语言方面很有天赋，希望通过这份工作增长自己的工作经验与社会技能。

【1】was→are 考查be动词的单复数变化。由于系动词的名词是复数形式，因此系动词也要变成复数形式，此文陈述的是招聘信息，还未找到求职者，应用现在时。

【2】graduated→graduating 考查非谓语动词。我与毕业是主动关系，因此用现在分词表主动。

【3】去掉the 考查冠词。由于作者还未上大学，所以大学前不用加定冠词the。

【4】them→it 考查代词。此处代词指前面提到的假期，假期就一个，所以用表示单数的代词it。

【5】when→where 考查定语从句引导词的使用。此处所表达的是在语言班我学习到了很多知识，应用表示地点的引导词where。

【6】Except→Besides 考查介词。except表示除了，而besides表示除了……还有。

【7】many→much 考查代词。经验是不可数名词，因此用much修饰

【8】full→fully 考查副词。动词前应用副词修饰

【9】staffs→staff 考查名词。员工是一个集合名词，因此不能加s。

【10】加to forward后加to考查动词的固定短语搭配，look forward to期望。

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