题目内容
【题目】你的美国笔友Mike听说你的外籍英语老师Mr.Smith很受学生欢迎,来信向你了解他的相关情况,并且很想到你们学校看一看。请根据以下内容,以李华的名义用英语向Mike介绍你的英语老师Mr.Smith:
1.工作努力,耐心热情,关心学生。
2.讲课生动有趣,学生对英语感兴趣,英语提高很大。
3.经常帮助英语有困难的学生并时常和学生一起进行体育活动。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已经给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I've just learned that you'd like me to introduce to you my favorite English teacher,Mr.Smith._______________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
I’ve just learned that you’d like me to introduce to you my favorite English teacher,Mr.Smith.Here is what I can tell you about him.
Mr.Smith,the foreign teacher of English,who is devoted to his teaching career heart and soul,is popular in our class and even in our school.Not only is he warm-hearted and patient to us,but he loves us all dearly.What’s more,he gives us English lessons in such a humorous and funny way that none of us feels tired in his class.As a result,we all show great interest in English and our English has improved a lot.Meanwhile,Mr.Smith spares no effort to help us with our English whenever we have trouble in learning English vocabulary and grammar.Besides,he often takes physical exercise with us after class,which makes him an easy-going teacher and good friend as well.
That’s all.I’m here just waiting for you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于人物介绍类短文写作,属于半开放性的作文。给的要点比较多,因此写作比较容易。 考生写作时要注意使用合适的连接词连接起全文,使文章更有条理,更连贯。同时注意时态的正确运用,在描述人物时,一般用现在的时态。同时可以做适当的发挥,在保证语法准确的基础上,使用一些高级词汇,短语,句型来提高文章档次。
【亮点说明】本文范文要点全面,脉络清楚合理,句型上变化多样。…what I can tell you about him.使用了表语从句;…who is devoted to his teaching career heart and soul和…which makes him an easy-going teacher and good friend as well使用了非限制性定语从句;Not only is he warm-hearted and patient to us使用了倒装句;…he gives us English lessons in such a humorous and funny way that none of us feels tired in his class.使用了结果状语从句; …whenever we have trouble in learning English vocabulary and grammar使用了让步状语从句。同时过渡词Not only…but…;What’s more;As a result;Meanwhile;Besides的使用让文章连贯流畅。