题目内容
【题目】假如你是李明,你的笔友王军写信告诉你,因为考试他出现了一些焦虑症状,请你写信给他一些建议:
建议内容:
1.考前制定好合适的复习计划;
2.考试期间有规律的作息;
3.睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠;
4.体育锻炼缓解压力;
5.听音乐放松。
注意:
1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;
2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;
3.词数:100个左右。开头结尾己给出,不计词数。
Dear Wang Jun,
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Yours,
Liming
【答案】Dear Wang Jun,
I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice.Here are a few suggestions.
First of all,it’s important for you to make careful plans for every exam and study hard every day.There is no need to worry too much about the results.Second/Besides,it’s necessary to get up and go to bed regularly during the period of exams.I advise you not to stay up too late.A warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed is helpful to your sleep.A sound sleep can make you energetic and enable you to perform well in an exam.What’s more, doing some exercise or listening to music may also relax you.
I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you.
Yours,
Liming
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文,要求写一封回信。要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点:1.考前制定好合适的复习计划;2.考试期间有规律的作息;3.睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠;4.体育锻炼缓解压力;5.听音乐放松。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: stay up熬夜,What’s more此外、而且。还使用了宾语
从句I advise you not to stay up too late.多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。
