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9．随着生活水平的提高，城市中饲养宠物狗的人越来越多．你班就"城市居民是否鼓励养宠物狗"展开讨论．请你根据下表所提供的信息用英语写一篇短文．（字数120词左右，开头不计）

40%同学认为	60%同学认为	个人看法
1．老人养宠物狗可以获得陪伴和宽慰 2．和宠物相处能使人生活更有趣味	1．养宠物狗污染环境 2．宠物狗会制造噪音甚至伤人	考生陈诉

Last week，we had a heat discussion on whether people in cities can keep pets．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）40% of the students hold the view that keeping pets is of benefit．
在表达40%人观点时，使用了that引导的一个同位语从句；
（高分句型二）Only in this way can we enjoy the fun of keeping pets without ma king troubles．
该句型使用了only 加介词短语，主句需倒装的句型结构，只有用这种方法，我们才能享受饲养宠物带来的乐趣而不是找麻烦；
高级词汇：object to 反对；comfort安慰；
过渡词：First首先；In addition此外；every coin has two sides每样事物都有两面；To make matters worse让事情更糟的是；

解答 Last week，we had a heat discussion on whether people in cities can keep pets．（高分句型一）40% of the students hold the view that keeping pets is of benefit．Advantages can be seen as follows．（列举理由）First，old people who live alone can get some comfort form pets．（进一步列举）In addition，getting along well with animals will make people's life more interesting．
    （60%同学认为）But every coin has two sides.60% of the students object to the idea．One of the important disadvantages is that the public environment will be polluted by the walking dogs．To make matters worse，some pets may make noise，and even attack people．
   （自己的看法） As far as I'm concerned，laws should be made to guide people to keep pets in a proper way．（高分句型二）Only in this way can we enjoy the fun of keeping pets without ma king troubles．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．