题目内容
【题目】假设你即将参加你校主题为“Preparing Myself for College Life”的英语演讲比赛。请根据提示写一则简短的英语演讲稿。构想一下你的大学生活和你打算怎么做来适应大学生活。内容要点应包括:
1. 确定新的学习目标;
2. 学会独立生活;
3. 参加各种活动;
4. 处理好与同学的关系。
注意:1. 短文的内容要连贯、完整;
2. 字数:100 左右(开头己给出的单词不计入单词总数)。
Preparing Myself for College Life
Hello, everyone! My college life is right around the corner and I’m getting ready for it.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】Preparing Myself for College Life
Hello, everyone! My college life is right around the corner and I’m getting ready for it. As for me, college life is a brand new experience. In order to get used to college life as soon as possible, I should prepare myself for that from now on.
To begin with, after entering college, I intend to set new goals in my studies and stick to them until I succeed. What’s more, since I am away from home, it is necessary for me to learn to live independently. Without doubt I should do laundry and clean-up all by myself. In my spare time, I will take part in a diversity of activities, such as going to the English Corner to practise my spoken English. In addition, getting along with my classmates and teachers at college is another challenge for me, but for sure I’ll make it.
I have a strong belief that my college life will be fabulous.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题:主题为“Preparing Myself for College Life”的英语演讲比赛的演讲稿,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子:around the corner临近,get ready for准备,brand new全新,In order to为了,get used to习惯,as soon as possible尽快,stick to坚持,take part in参加,getting along with,it is necessary for me to learn to live independently运用了形式主语,I have a strong belief that my college life will be fabulous同位语从句,运用了To begin with,What’s more,In addition等短语使文章更有条理性。