题目内容
20.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Jack,
I'm sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school,because you find it hard to make friends.Now,I'd like to offer you any advice.
Firstly,it's normal for you to feel lonely because you were living in a new environment.Secondly,you should greet classmates when met them on campus. Thirdly,it will be a good idea if you take an actively part in class activities,what can help them learn more about you.I believe you will be able to make new friends soon unless you're friendly to the others.
I hope the suggestion above will be helpful to you and that everything will be fine with you for the future.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本文为书信.在这封信里,作者给刚到新学校而感到不适应的朋友提供了一些小建议.
首先这是很正常的一种情绪,第二,遇到你的同班同学的时候要打招呼;第三积极参加班级活动.如果你对别人友好,我相信很快你就能交到新朋友.
解答 Dear Jack,
I'm sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school,because you find it hard to make friends.Now,I'd like to offer you any advice.Firstly,it's normal for you to feel lonely because you were living in a new environment.Secondly,you should greet∧classmates when met them on campus.Thirdly,it will be a good idea if you take an actively part in class activities,what can help them learn more about you.I believe you will be able to make new friends soon unless you're friendly to the others.I hope the suggestion above will be helpful to you and that everything will be fine with you for the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
1:any改成some. 考查形容词.any任何(的),用于否定句,some一些(的),用于肯定句.此处为肯定句"我想给你提供一些建议".故any改成some.
2:were改成are. 考查动词时态.此处描述的是现在的事实,所以应使用一般现在时.故were改成are.
3:classmates前加your.考查代词.本句表示"遇到你的同班同学的时候要打招呼",所以classmates前加your.
4:met改成meeting.考查非谓语动词.做时间状语,而且meet与主语you之间为逻辑主谓关系,此处表主动,应使用现在分词形式.句意:当在校园里遇到同学的时候,你应该跟他们打招呼.故met改成meeting.
5:actively改成active. 考查形容词.此处作名词part的定语,应使用形容词形式.故actively改成active.
6:what改成which. 考查定语从句.此处为非限制性定语从句,关系词在从句中作主语,指代前面整句话描述的内容.故what改成which.
7:unless改成if. 考查连词.unless除非;if如果.句意:如果你对别人友好,我相信很快你就能交到新朋友.故unless改成if.
8:去掉the 考查冠词.others泛指"其他人",the others特指"一群人中的其他人".根据语境可知,此处应表泛指.故去掉the.
9:suggestion改成suggestions. 考查名词的数.根据语境可知,前文提到了好几条建议,所以suggestion应使用复数形式.故suggestion改成suggestions.
10:for改为in.考查介词.固定短语in the future表示"未来".
点评 考查短文改错.
短文改错时要注意一下几点:1.快速阅读,整体把握短文大意.2.重视语境以及上下文的关系.3.充分运用基础语言知识找出错误所在.
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