Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom来信：由于过多使用手机，学习和生活受到极大影响，现在父母亲禁止使用，非常苦恼。请回信，帮他找些理由说服父母。

要点如下：

1. 表示同情。

2. 手机对学生的好处：联系父母与朋友；查阅资料；娱乐放松。

3. 你的意见。

注意 ： 1.字数120左右；信的开头已为你写好。

2. 可根据要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

I’m very sorry to know that you are in trouble now.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

How nice to hear from you! In the letter you’ve mentioned that the excessive use of mobile phone made a negative impact on your study and that you are not allowed to use it anymore. I feel sorry about your situation. And here is some advice to help persuade your parents.

Despite its disadvantages, mobile phones have already become a necessity in our daily life. First, using the cell phone is much more convenient to contact with parents and friends in an emergency. In addition, mobile devices provide us with the possibilities to search for information whenever and wherever we want. Finally, students could download apps on the phones, which offers them a chance for entertainment after long-time learning.

In my opinion, what’s more important for you is to use the cell phones reasonably. As it is said, use your cell phone and don't let it use you.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放作文。李华的美国朋友Tom由于过多使用手机，学习和生活受到极大影响，现在父母亲禁止使用，非常苦恼。本文要求以李华的身份给Tom回信，说服他的父母亲。所以本文使用第三人称和一般现在时。要点：1.知悉对方情况，表示同情。2.说明手机对学生的好处：联系父母与朋友；查阅资料；娱乐放松。3.个人意见：要合理使用手机，尤其在于使用手机的时间以及用途。建议文章分成三段，三个要点各成一段。其次在第二段中可做适当发挥，让理由更充分。同时注意语言的地道性，不要出现中国式英语的句式和表达。