Question

 

When I was four years old I got ill . I took medicine twice

a day . The medicine had so a bitter taste that I took it mixed in          1.

orange juice . The problem was that I can still taste the medicine .        2.

In a particular afternoon my mother brought the drink in . As           3.

she gave it to me , when the phone rang and she went to answer          4.

it . I looked at the orange drink and decided I couldn’t face them ,       5.

so I hid the glass behind a pile magazines . Of course , when           6.

my mother was asked , “ Have you already taken your medicine ? ”      7.

I said , “ Yes . ” I felt very pleased with me . The next day , my            8.

mother found drink when she was doing the housework . She           9.

looked at me serious and said , “ It’s bad to tell lies ! ”                  10.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

1.本题考测such和so的区别，such a (an) + adj. + n.= so + adj. + a (an) + n.

2.本题考测时态一致，表语从句的时态应该和前面的时态一致，即与was 一致

3.本题考测介词，在特定的某天下午，介词应该用on

4.本题考测连词，连词重复，前面有as, 主句的when要去掉

5.本题考测代词与数的一致。face 的宾语是juice, 应用单数代词it

6.本题考测介词，一堆东西a pile of sth. 固定搭配， of 不能省略

7.本题考测语态，主语my mother是动作的发出者，不用被动语态，因此用主动语态asked

8.本题考测代词，主语是I，所以这里应该改为myself

9.本题考测冠词，drink（饮料）是名词，在上文已提到，特指那份饮料，故加the

10.本题考测词性，严肃地看着某人，应该用副词serious修饰动词 look at

【备考建议】

    天津市的短文改错，不再拘泥于每次总有一个正确的改错文章，给出的十个题全部有错。二个增词，二个删词，六个改词。这对拿着经验教条的学生来说无疑是当头棒喝（短文改错题常常是一个对，三个增词或删词，六个改词）。考测的重点也有了偏重，两个代词，两个介词，两个动词（时态和语态）。这就对考生在今后的短文改错题训练提出了更高的要求。需要学生做到语法功底扎实，思路清淅，考生应当加强此类题目的训练。

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