题目内容

以“Love is Needed”为题,按照以下提示写一篇英语短文。

要点:1. 世界需要爱,爱的意义;  2. 用例子加以说明;3. 我们该怎么做。

要求:1. 词数:150左右;   2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Love is Needed

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【解析】

试题分析:本题考查了开放性作文,只是给出了一个话题世界需要爱,考生需要自己来总结要点,可以从世界上所有的人对于爱的追求,人们对于爱的态度等方面出发来写作。在总结方面应该说明人们不仅仅需要爱,而且要把自己的爱给予别人。.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点:考查开放性作文

点评:本文属于开放性作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

 

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