Question

爱是人类普遍而伟大的感情，请以“love”为题，写一篇100单词左右的英语小短文。文章每一段的前一句话已经给出。

　　Love plays an important part in this world today.

　　The love between you and your parents is a specials love.

　　There are other kinds of love.

Answer 1

Love

　　Love plays an important part in this world today. With the increasing modernization of society, relationship between people are becoming looser and looser. It is difficult to imagine what they would be like if there were no love for each other. Love is the caring and concern for, and understanding of other people and the acceptance of their strength and weaknesses. To love and to be loved is the true happiness in life.

　　The love between you and your parents is a special one. This love, as any other sincere love, must be honest and be shared by both parents and children. The love of parents is a great support in their children’s lives. It will remain with them and help them overcome all the difficulties and make them feel secure.

　　There are other kinds of love. Love between friends, partners, human beings and animals. The power of love makes us endure the difficulties in our lives, even though we may not have the chance to think about it, it maybe be kept alive deeply in our heart.

解析:

解析：文章应自然流畅, 要点明确，语法正确, 段落清晰。

解题方法：

(1）审题。明确大范围的要求。高考的书面表达题材多，有的是文字背景材料提供要点，有的看图作文或者图表材料作文，还有两者相结合的。各种提示材料都要仔细阅读，审题必须到边到位。

(2) 立题。明确主题是什么，突出要点的主体性地位，做好内容上必要的删减。

(3) 丰题。就提供的信息进行语言上的组织，作适当的具体的补充。通过细致准取得语言运用来补“血”补“肉”，使所要写出来的文章意思连贯，语言畅通，逻辑严密。此过程的语言加工主要是做到：主谓一致和动词的时态语态正确运用；体现连接词在复合句中的使用；递进，并列，转折等等副词（短语）运用使语言连贯，表达清楚；新课标高级词汇运用给文章添彩添色；开放式作文适当展开合理联想；正确拼写，书写美观大方。

(4) 查题。查信息点是否完整，有没有遗漏。查语法是否正确，词法方面主要检查拼写，冠词、名词单复数和词语搭配等。句法方面主要检查是否正确使用时态、语态、主谓一致、一些连接词，过渡词等。