题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你校英国留学生、你的好友Jimmy对中国茶文化很感兴趣,你认为利用周末带他到当地茶叶市场去了解不同种类的中国茶对他很有意义。请你给他写一封邮件将你的想法告诉他,并征求他的意见。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 简单介绍茶叶市场;
3. 期待回复。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jimmy,
How are you doing? Knowing that you're a big fan of Chinese tea culture, I'm writing to discuss my idea with you.
I think it will be meaningful to take you to the local tea market to get a good knowledge of the various kinds of tea in China. I learned that English people drink black tea and green tea. However, things are very different in China. We have a much larger variety. I think the tea market is a great place to learn that and it also provides tea-tasting and tea culture-experiencing activities.
Do you think this is a good idea? If so, we can arrange a time on the weekend to have a great time there.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:一般现在时
结构:三段式。
第一段:提出写信目的;
第二段:介绍茶叶市场(去茶叶市场的意义);
第三段:期盼相见。
要求:1.写信目的(discuss my idea with you)
2.介绍茶叶市场(be meaningful to take you to the local tea market)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
a big fan of, discuss with, be meaningful to, get a good knowledge of, tea culture-experiencing, have a great time,arrange,if so
第三步:连词成句
1.I'm writing to discuss my idea with you.
2. I think it will be meaningful to take you to the local tea market to get a good knowledge of the various kinds of tea in China.
3. I think the tea market is a great place to learn that and it also provides tea-tasting and tea culture-experiencing activities.
4. If so, we can arrange a time on the weekend to have a great time there.
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改