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【题目】假如你是李华,你在美国的笔友Henry在互联网上偶然读到了有关2017年成都菊花花会的帖子,对此很感兴趣。他来信询问有关菊花花会的相关情况。请你根据下表提示的内容给Henry回一封信。
始创于 | 1983年 |
会期 | 每年10月18日至11月18日 |
展区 | 龙亭公园为主会场,其它各个公园均有展区 |
活动内容 | 赏菊,观看精彩节目(历史短剧,服装秀等),品尝成都小吃 |
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
4.参考词汇:菊花花会Chrysanthemum Festival。
Dear Henry,
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I am looking forward to your visit next year.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Henry,
I’m very happy to learn that you are interested in our city flower-chrysanthemum.Now I’d like to introduce the Chrysanthemum Festival.
The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983,enjoying a history of over 30 years.From then on,it is held from October 18 to November 18 every year.During the festival,a variety of attractive chrysanthemums are displayed in Longting Park as well as in other parks.There is no doubt that visitors can admire beautiful chrysanthemums there.Besides,there are wonderful performances in the parks,such as historical short plays,and costume shows.Enjoying delicious local snacks is also a good choice.
I am looking forward to your visit next year.
Dear Henry,
I’m very happy to learnthat you are interested in our city flower-chrysanthemum.Now I’d like to introduce the Chrysanthemum Festival.(开头-引出话题)
The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983,enjoying ahistory of over 30 years.【高分句型】(始创于)
From then on,it is held from October 18 to November 18 every year.(会期) During the festival,a variety of attractive chrysanthemums are displayed inLongting Park as well as in other parks.(展区)
There is no doubt that visitors canadmire beautiful chrysanthemums there.【高分句型】Besides,there arewonderful performances in the parks,such ashistorical short plays,and costume shows.Enjoying delicious local snacks is also a good choice.【高分句型】(活动内容)
I am looking forward to your visit next year.
【解析】试题分析:本文是一篇提纲式作文,美国的笔友Henry来信询问有关菊花花会的相关情况,根据提示写一封回信。它是应用文中的书信写作,试题只给出写作框架,并未给出所有的具体写作细节。写好此文,需注意三点:一是写信格式要准确,信的结尾已经给出,但切要写好信的开头。二是要详略得当,本文应重点写的是有关菊花花会的相关情况。三要注意适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。另外,在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。
【亮点说明】
本文是一篇书信,格式正确,内容齐全,语句精炼,文中使用高级词汇和高级句子。The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983,enjoying ahistory of over 30 years.现在分词做伴随状语;There is no doubt that visitors canadmire beautiful chrysanthemums there.句中使用同位语从句;Enjoying delicious local snacks is also a good choice.动名词短语做主语;另外,From then on,a variety of,as well as,Besides,等的运用为文章增色添彩。