题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,是一名高二学生。最近,你校广播站面向全体学生招募两名英语播音员。你很想尝试一下,请根据下面的要点写一封自荐信
内容要点如下:
1.自我介绍和写信的目的;
2.自身优势;
3.希望被录取。
注意:
1.词数100左右;。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua.
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I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua. I am a student in Class1, Grade2. I have read the notice that our school radio station needs two English announcers, so I am writing to introduce myself.
First of all, I am greatly interested in broadcasting. I have received some professional training in my spare time, hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future. Now I would like to put what I have learned into practice and gain some experience. Besides, I am good at English, especially spoken English. I won the first prize in the English Speech Competition last year. So I think I am highly qualified for the job. If I am admitted, I will try my best to serve the students. I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to work for the school radio station.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:假如你是李华,是一名高二学生。最近,你校广播站面向全体学生招募两名英语播音员。你很想尝试一下,请根据下面的要点写一封自荐信。内容要点如下:1.自我介绍和写信的目的;2.自身优势;3.希望被录取。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1.词数100左右;。2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇书信,采用三段式,要点齐全,布局合理,使用高级句子。I have read the notice that our school radio station needs two English announcers, so I am writing to introduce myself. That引导同位语从句,so是并列句的标志;I have received some professional training in my spare time, hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future.现在分词做伴随状态;I would like to put what I have learned into practice and gain some experience. what引导宾语从句;If I am admitted, I will try my best to serve the students条件状语从句运用巧妙;另外,First of all, Besides,的运用为文章增色添彩。